thank you:) GINA!!
학생이 쓴 원문
My partner and I both love having a chicken and going to the Han River where we can see the beautiful night view.
so we said that we really want to recommend it to our interviewers who have come to Korea using their precious time for us.
Have you ever been unhappy with the duty manager\'s decision?
I can\'t remember everything, but of course there was something hard to understand.
If the decision is not against the law, I think it is right to follow the manager\'s decision. Because the manager has more experience than me and obviously has the ability to see things further.
I think we should trust the manager\'s decision because she has been recognized as a manager by the company.
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when customer keep their luggage, it takes a long time to return their luggage with their serial number and the guests name written on the luggage tag when there are so many luggage. So I suggested that we simply write down the customer\'s luggage color on the paper we give our customers.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sujin!
Thank you for submitting your compositions.
Your answer on \"Have you ever been unhappy with the duty manager\'s decision?\" was really good.
I think, it\'s perfect. ^^
Anyway, see you later in class.
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
so we said that we really want to recommend it to our interviewers who have come to Korea using their precious time for us.
so we said that we really want to recommend it to our interviewers who have come to Korea using their precious time for us.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: So we said that we really want to recommend it our interviewers who came to Korea with their precious time.
Have you ever been unhappy with the duty manager\'s decision?
I can\'t remember everything, but of course there was something hard to understand.
If the decision is not against the law, I think it is right to follow the manager\'s decision. Because the manager has more experience than me and obviously has the ability to see things further.
I think we should trust the manager\'s decision because she has been recognized as a manager by the company.
>> CORRECT.
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when customer keep their luggage, it takes a long time to return their luggage with their serial number and the guests name written on the luggage tag when there are so many luggage. So I suggested that we simply write down the customer\'s luggage color on the paper we give our customers.
when customer keep their luggage, it takes a long time to return their luggage with their serial number and the guests name written on the luggage tag when there are so many luggage. So I suggested that we simply write down the customer\'s luggage color on the paper we give our customers.
>> When customers let us keep their luggage, it takes a long time for us to return it to them by using their serial numbers and names written on their luggage. At the same time, there are so many luggage. So, I suggested that we simply write down the customer\'s luggage color on the paper we give our customers to easily find them.
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