thank you Jade

2010-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 JADE

학생이 쓴 원문

I just see that you had correct my sentence. Thank you so much These days, I feel that time goes by so fast. It's very scary to me. I have a lot of things to do, but I did achieve nothing. It makes me gloomy. But You encourage me. At that moment, I read your reply, I decide to become more diligent than I used to be. Diligent... I have heard that word long long time ago. It is impressive to me. Thank you so much for cheering me up. I don't know what time it is in Philippines, but, anyway, Good night Jade! kk

강사 첨삭

[이름], Thanks for the note^^ I will expect you being more diligent then. Haha We have an hour time difference. If it is 1:00 am in Korea, it is 12:00 am here in the Philippines. Have a nice day^^ call you soon…….. I just see that you had correct my sentence.>>I have just seen your corrections for my sentences. Thank you so much>>correct These days, I feel that time goes by so fast.>>These days, it feels like times is going by too fast. It's very scary to me.>>It’s very scary. I have a lot of things to do, but I did achieve nothing. >>I have a lot of things to do but I haven’t yet achieved anything.It makes me gloomy.>>correct But You encourage me. >>Correct At that moment, I read your reply, I decide to become more diligent than I used to be.>>The moment I read your reply, I have decided to become more diligent that I used to be. Diligent...>>correct I have heard that word long long time ago.>>Correct It is impressive to me. >>It sounds impressive to me. Thank you so much for cheering me up.>>Correct I don't know what time it is in Philippines, but, anyway, >>Correct Good night Jade! Kk >>correct

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·