thank you mail
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello~
Thank you for your best support for this year.
I hope we get better business relarionship next year.
I am sure our business very well together.
It is snowing in Korea.
Happy new year~~~!!
Thank you.
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for sending this. Great job, I didn’t find much errors ^^
***Teacher Jane ***
Hello~ Thank you for your best support for this year.
>> correct
>> I thank you for extending your best suppor this year. I hope we get better business relarionship next year.
>> I hope we will have a better business relationship next year. I am sure our business very well together.
>> I’m sure that our business together will be prosperous. It is snowing in Korea.
>> CorrectHappy new year~~~!!
>> Correct.
Thank you.
>> Correct[이름] Jeong
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