Thank you, teacher!!

Hello, my teacher^^ It's cloudy today..! I do not like the weather like this, because it makes me down!! Snow is much needed! hahaha Anyway, Thank you for your concerning about my toefl test. I think you give me an assignment for my test. Right?^^ Thank you! You are so sweet!! I prefer to live in a big city. First of all, there are a lot of modern facilities, such as amusement parks, cinemas and restaurents. For example, when I was in elementary school, my mother use to bring me an amusement park and very delicious restaurant. I could spend great time and enjoy there and they are great memories in my life. Second, there are many historycal places, as well, so I can understand about history class more easily. To be specific, by visiting to musiums, I can see various kinds of ruins in direct, and they would remain in my memory. As a result, I could learn a lot about history, moreover, I could get a good grades in my history class.

Hello, [이름]!Cheer up! I know the weather\'s making you down but don\'t ruin your day because of that. Well, to be honest, i hate rainy days. And in my country, we have 6 months or even more of rainy days... I wish rainy season would not come. I hope it\'s okay with you if I give you this kinds of homework. Don\'t worry, it\'s not going to be everyday. That was an excellent homework. I believe you gave me 2 reasons, right? And yes, this is the most important thing you have to mention in your answer.Keep it up!-Teacher Michelle- Here are some corrections for you:Hello, my teacher^^>>CorrectIt\'s cloudy today..!>>CorrectI do not like the weather like this, because it makes me down!!>>I do not like this kind of weather, because it makes me down!!Snow is much needed! hahaha>>CorrectAnyway, Thank you for your concerning about my toefl test.>>Anyway, thank you for your concern about my toefl test.I think you give me an assignment for my test. Right?^^>>I think you gave me an assignment for my test. Right?^^Thank you! You are so sweet!!>>CorrectI prefer to live in a big city.>>CorrectFirst of all, there are a lot of modern facilities, such as amusement parks, cinemas and restaurents.>>CorrectFor example, when I was in elementary school, my mother use to bring me an amusement park and very delicious restaurant.>>For example, when I was in the elementary school, my mother use to bring me to an amusement park and to a very delicious restaurant.I could spend great time and enjoy there and they are great memories in my life.>>I could spend great time and enjoy the place and they are a lot of great memories in my life.Second, there are many historycal places, as well, so I can understand about history class more easily.>>CorrectTo be specific, by visiting to musiums, I can see various kinds of ruins in direct, and they would remain in my memory.>>To be specific, by visiting the museums, I can see various kinds of ruins in direct, and they would remain in my memory.As a result, I could learn a lot about history, moreover, I could get a good grades in my history class.>>As a result, I could learn a lot about history, moreover, I could get good grades in my history class.