thanks a lot .
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강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!
Thanks for answering your homework.
It is good to know that you enjoyed your weekend with your friends.
And do hopefully you could go back there with your husband.
Anyway, have a great time and take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
6,27th
Please plan about your life in the future.
>> correct!
Please have a passion and then learn English.
>> correct!
6,30th
I went to the special restaurant with my friends last night.
>> I went to a special restaurant with my friends last night.
I like the quiet atmosphere and tasty food in the restaurant.
>> correct!
I hope that I go to the restaurant with husband again.
>> I hope to go to the restaurant again with my husband.
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