thanks a lot .
학생이 쓴 원문
I moved great apartment with 2bathroom, large living room, many closet and nice view.
Actually it is the biggest my adventure.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ms. [이름]!
Wow, I am imagining now how great your apartment is.
Luck you Ms. [이름] that you have fun such good apartment.
Anyway, I hope that I would be able to talk to you later!
Have a happy Friday!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I moved great apartment with 2bathroom, large living room, many closet and nice view.
>> I moved to a great apartment with 2 bathrooms, a large living room, many closets and a nice view.
Actually it is the biggest my adventure.
>> Actually, this is my biggest adventure.
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