thanks a lot, 7 7th hw
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I think I would be more effective to sttend another institute.
Because privste indtitutes have a wide curriculum snd teachets have strong responsibility.
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Hello Ms. [이름]!
Thanks for sending your composition.
Private education is very important in Korea nowadays.
And it is really very competitive.
And I am very sure that you are letting your children attend a private institute.
See you again tomorrow!
Enjoy your day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I think I would be more effective to sttend another institute.
>> I think that it would be more effective to attend another institute.
Because privste indtitutes have a wide curriculum snd teachets have strong responsibility.
>> Because private institutes have a wide wide curriculum and teachers have a strong responsibility.
Thanks for sending your composition.
Private education is very important in Korea nowadays.
And it is really very competitive.
And I am very sure that you are letting your children attend a private institute.
See you again tomorrow!
Enjoy your day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I think I would be more effective to sttend another institute.
>> I think that it would be more effective to attend another institute.
Because privste indtitutes have a wide curriculum snd teachets have strong responsibility.
>> Because private institutes have a wide wide curriculum and teachers have a strong responsibility.
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