thanks for interview

2013-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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(Teacher! I interviewed for around twenty minutes and It was very good because every question were already prepared! So, It finished very smoothly! I think I should send thanks email for this interview to the interviewer. So I am writing this!) Dear admission committee, Good afternoon! This is [Name] [이름] and It was a great pleasure to talk with you, knowing your busy schedule! Although I am not fluent enough in English to express myself well, I think it was a good opportunity for me to show the strength of my desire to apply to John Jay Criminal Justice. I know that one another interview still remain, but, I should talk I was really enjoyed our talk! Once again, thank you for taking the time to talk with me. It was a great honor. I look forward to talk with you Feb 19th 9 in the morning! Sincerely yours, HyeonJung [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing this experience with me. I knew you can do it. ^^ Please go over with some of the given corrections below your sentences. Kindly practice them.Have a safe weekend. See you in class. ~Teacher Grace~ Teacher! I interviewed for around twenty minutes and It was very good because every question were already prepared! So, It finished very smoothly! >>Teacher, I had an interview for around twenty minutes and it was very good because I prepared for the questions Thus, the interview finished smoothly. I think I should send thanks email for this interview to the interviewer. So I am writing this!)>>I think, I should send a \"Thank you \" letter to the interviewer so I\'m writing it this way:Dear admission committee,>>Dear [Name],Good afternoon! This is [Name] [이름] and It was a great pleasure to talk with you, knowing your busy schedule!>>Good afternoon! This is [Name] [이름]. It was a pleasure talking to you knowing you have a busy schedule.Although I am not fluent enough in English to express myself well, I think it was a good opportunity for me to show the strength of my desire to apply to John Jay Criminal Justice.>>Though I am not fluent in English and couldn\'t express myself well, I think it was a good opportunity for me to show my strong desire to apply in John Jay Criminal Justice. I know that one another interview still remain, but, I should talk I was really enjoyed our talk! >>I\'m aware that I still have one interview, moreover I want to tell you that I enjoyed our conversation.Once again, thank you for taking the time to talk with me. It was a great honor. >> Once again, thank you for your time. It was my honor to have that conversation.I look forward to talk with you Feb 19th 9 in the morning! >> I look forward to talk to you again on February 19 at 9:00 in the morning. Sincerely yours, HyeonJung [이름]>>Correct!!

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