Thanks for your effort.

2013-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hi Jeniffer, Thank you for your effort for [이름] and sorry for his impolite attitude during calss time. As usually, I have checked the recording, and today I downloaded mp3. I am so suprised and worried about his attitude. As you know, he seems he does not focus on this class even if you are best effort for him. so I am very sorry and please understand his attitude. I will let him know how he should show during the class and I will let him focus on conversation with you. Sorry again and please looking forward to helping him to take the this class more carefully. Thanks a lot. HenryKim.

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Hello, Sir! Thank you for communicating with me regarding your son\'s class. Don\'t worry, I understand [이름]\'s attitude in class. He is just a kid and I, myself have a son and I know how boys his age are. I am only sorry that I am not very effective in making him retain his attention in class and so I want to thank you for helping me on this. If you have suggestions or comments regarding our class, feel free to write on this page..Please understand that I have to correct your sentences even if I know that you are only writing to me.. Have a good day! T. Jennifer Hi Jeniffer,>> Hi, Jennifer!Thank you for your effort for [이름] and sorry for his impolite attitude during calss time. >>Thank you for your effort for [이름] and sorry for his impolite attitude during class time.As usually, I have checked the recording, and today I downloaded mp3. >>As usual, I have checked the recording, and today I downloaded the mp3. I am so suprised and worried about his attitude. >> Correct!As you know, he seems he does not focus on this class even if you are best effort for him. so I am very sorry and please understand his attitude. >>As you know, he seems not focussed on this class even if you are giving your best effort for him so I am very sorry and please understand his attitude. I will let him know how he should show during the class and I will let him focus on conversation with you. >>I will let him know how he should behave during the class and I will let him focus on his conversation with you. Sorry again and please looking forward to helping him to take the this class more carefully.>>Sorry again and I look forward to your help in making him take this class more seriously.Thanks a lot. >>Correct!HenryKim >> Correct!

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