Thanks for your recommandation.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Wendy.
Thanks for your recommandation. It is a good song which is hall of fame by the script.
I couldn't hear that song during the working hours but I read the words of song.
It has great meaning and cheer people up.
As you suggested, we can free talking tonight. Don't feel down. Life is like a a long Journey. Sometimes, you are happy. Sometimes, you are sad.
Be smile and happy. One of my friends taught me that expression.:)
There are the answers for the questions you gave me.
1) talked to the girl whose car had broken down in front of the shop.
2) Mr. [Name], who is a taxi driver, lives on the corner.
3) We often visit our aunt in Norwich which is in East Anglia.
Enjoy the rest of your afternoon.
강사 첨삭
HI THERE! :)
I really like the song too.
It makes me feel better specially when I\'m sad.
I\'m going to my mom\'s place tonight because I will give her my sallary.
No more money for me!
Haha!
Thank you for being good in class!
Here are your corrections
-T. Wendy ^^
Hello Wendy. >> CorrectThanks for your recommandation.
>> Correct
It is a good song which is hall of fame by the script.
>>Correct
OR It\'s better if you say
>>> The song hall of fame by the script is a good song.I couldn\'t hear that song during the working hours but I read the words of song.
>>I couldn\'t listen to the song during work hours but I read the words of the song.It has great meaning and cheer people up. >>CorrectAs you suggested, we can free talking tonight.
>>As you suggested, we can have free talking tonight.
OR
>> As you requested, we can have free talking tonight.
(Because I was the one who asked you if we can have free talking tonight.)
Don\'t feel down.
>>Correct
Life is like a a long Journey.
>>Correct
Sometimes, you are happy.
>>Correct
Sometimes, you are sad. >>CorrectBe smile and happy.
>>Be happy and smile.
friends taught me that expression.:)>> Friends taught me that expression. :)There are the answers for the questions you gave me. >>These are the answers for the questions you gave me.
(These-- means you are talking about your answers.)1) talked to the girl whose car had broken down in front of the shop. >>Correct2) Mr. [Name], who is a taxi driver, lives on the corner. >> Correct3) We often visit our aunt in Norwich which is in East Anglia.>> CorrectEnjoy the rest of your afternoon.
>> Correct
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