Thanks for your recommandation.

2013-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Wendy. Thanks for your recommandation. It is a good song which is hall of fame by the script. I couldn't hear that song during the working hours but I read the words of song. It has great meaning and cheer people up. As you suggested, we can free talking tonight. Don't feel down. Life is like a a long Journey. Sometimes, you are happy. Sometimes, you are sad. Be smile and happy. One of my friends taught me that expression.:) There are the answers for the questions you gave me. 1) talked to the girl whose car had broken down in front of the shop. 2) Mr. [Name], who is a taxi driver, lives on the corner. 3) We often visit our aunt in Norwich which is in East Anglia. Enjoy the rest of your afternoon.

강사 첨삭

HI THERE! :) I really like the song too. It makes me feel better specially when I\'m sad. I\'m going to my mom\'s place tonight because I will give her my sallary. No more money for me! Haha! Thank you for being good in class! Here are your corrections -T. Wendy ^^ Hello Wendy. >> CorrectThanks for your recommandation. >> Correct It is a good song which is hall of fame by the script. >>Correct OR It\'s better if you say >>> The song hall of fame by the script is a good song.I couldn\'t hear that song during the working hours but I read the words of song. >>I couldn\'t listen to the song during work hours but I read the words of the song.It has great meaning and cheer people up. >>CorrectAs you suggested, we can free talking tonight. >>As you suggested, we can have free talking tonight. OR >> As you requested, we can have free talking tonight. (Because I was the one who asked you if we can have free talking tonight.) Don\'t feel down. >>Correct Life is like a a long Journey. >>Correct Sometimes, you are happy. >>Correct Sometimes, you are sad. >>CorrectBe smile and happy. >>Be happy and smile. friends taught me that expression.:)>> Friends taught me that expression. :)There are the answers for the questions you gave me. >>These are the answers for the questions you gave me. (These-- means you are talking about your answers.)1) talked to the girl whose car had broken down in front of the shop. >>Correct2) Mr. [Name], who is a taxi driver, lives on the corner. >> Correct3) We often visit our aunt in Norwich which is in East Anglia.>> CorrectEnjoy the rest of your afternoon. >> Correct

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