Thanks God!! It's a Friday...!!!!!!! yaa hoo
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi!!
During the work time. I am doing the writing session.
As I told you, We have a tough company analysis meeting on friday regularly. I am preparing SK-energy (no 1 oil company in korea).
Next year, SKenergy is expected to make more money, because there is a only small CAPA addition on refinery business.
Refining margin will be increase due to a small capa addition.
WOW. CEO is hanging around with our team. I should go now. Bye.!!
강사 첨삭
Wow, Ho Chan!
You challenged me with this writing session.^^ I am not quite familiar with the refinery business. Sorry!^^ Maybe you can explain in writing about "CAPA" because when I googled it, there were so many possible meanings.^^
However, this was very interesting. I like learning new things.
Also, do focus on your work! ㅋㅋㅋ
~June
Hi!!
>> Correct
During the work time. I am doing the writing session.
>> During work time, I am now doing the writing session.
As I told you, We have a tough company analysis meeting on friday regularly.
>> As I told you, we regularly have a tough company analysis meeting on Fridays.
I am preparing SK-energy (no 1 oil company in korea).
>> I am preparing for SK Energy (the no. 1 oil company in Korea).
Next year, SKenergy is expected to make more money, because there is a only small CAPA addition on refinery business.
>> Next year, SK Energy is expected to make more money because there is only a small CAPA addition in the refinery business.
Refining margin will be increase due to a small capa addition.
>> The refining margin will increase due to a small capa addition.
WOW. CEO is hanging around with our team. I should go now. Bye.!!
>> WOW. The CEO is hanging around with our team. I should go now. Bye!
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