Thanks God!! It's a Friday...!!!!!!! yaa hoo

2010-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 June

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Hi!! During the work time. I am doing the writing session. As I told you, We have a tough company analysis meeting on friday regularly. I am preparing SK-energy (no 1 oil company in korea). Next year, SKenergy is expected to make more money, because there is a only small CAPA addition on refinery business. Refining margin will be increase due to a small capa addition. WOW. CEO is hanging around with our team. I should go now. Bye.!!

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Wow, Ho Chan! You challenged me with this writing session.^^ I am not quite familiar with the refinery business. Sorry!^^ Maybe you can explain in writing about "CAPA" because when I googled it, there were so many possible meanings.^^ However, this was very interesting. I like learning new things. Also, do focus on your work! ㅋㅋㅋ ~June   Hi!! >> Correct During the work time. I am doing the writing session. >> During work time, I am now doing the writing session. As I told you, We have a tough company analysis meeting on friday regularly. >> As I told you, we regularly have a tough company analysis meeting on Fridays. I am preparing SK-energy (no 1 oil company in korea). >> I am preparing for SK Energy (the no. 1 oil company in Korea). Next year, SKenergy is expected to make more money, because there is a only small CAPA addition on refinery business. >> Next year, SK Energy is expected to make more money because there is only a small CAPA addition in the refinery business. Refining margin will be increase due to a small capa addition. >> The refining margin will increase due to a small capa addition. WOW. CEO is hanging around with our team. I should go now. Bye.!! >> WOW. The CEO is hanging around with our team. I should go now. Bye!

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