Thanks to you I had a good day! Thank you, Kristel:)!

2014-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

The best memory I have with my friends happened when I was in elementary school. I couldn't remember how old I was. Maybe it was when I was in fifth or sixth grade. It was rainy day. And my friends and I were on our way to home from the school. And of course, we were holding up our umbrellas. On the way to home, we found a big puddle and soon we started to play splashing water to each other. It was so fun that I remember it until now. However I couldn't remember all of their faces. In the end, our umbrellas were laid aside and we were all get wet. But none of us complained about it. Then we went to a sauna afterwards. And about the composition yesterday, in the sentence "Then I washed my hands of the person", I meant that when I am treated rudely several times then I cut the relation with the person. I was trying to find the expression that means cutting the relation and found "wash one's hands of the person". I think it's not good expression, isn't it? Bye:)

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!! Thank you very much for this. Also, it was very nice that you\'ve explained thoroughly what you wanted to say and meant with your expression. The expression was right though it is not commonly use in conversations. Usually, we use the expression, \"Burn bridges\". Perhaps you could check that out too. :) See you tomorrow and have a nice day~~ T.Kristel- The best memory I have with my friends happened when I was in elementary school. >>  >>  The best memory I have with my friends happened when I was in the elementary. I couldn\'t remember how old I was. Maybe it was when I was in fifth or sixth grade. >> CORRECT!! Maybe that was when I was in the fifth or sixth grade.It was rainy day. And my friends and I were on our way to home from the school. >> It was a rainy day. CORRECT!!And of course, we were holding up our umbrellas. >> CORRECT!!On the way to home, we found a big puddle and soon we started to play splashing water to each other. >> On the way home, we found  a big puddle and soon we started to splash water to each other.It was so fun that I remember it until now. However I couldn\'t remember all of their faces. >> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!In the end, our umbrellas were laid aside and we were all get wet. >> In the end, our umbrellas were laid aside and we all got wet.But none of us complained about it. >> CORRECT!!Then we went to a sauna afterwards. >> CORRECT!!And about the composition yesterday, in the sentence \"Then I washed my hands of the person\", I meant that when I am treated rudely several times then I cut the relation with the person. >> CORRECT!!I was trying to find the expression that means cutting the relation and found \"wash one\'s hands of the person\". >> CORRECT!!I think it\'s not good expression, isn\'t it? >> CORRECT!!Bye:) >> CORRECT!!

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