Thanks you ! Eden.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name] !
I was embarrassed today morning. My smartphone didn't work suddenly.
I didn't drop in the water but didn't work. Smartphone is very complicated, so small neglcting cause in a unable state. I saw your massage. you called me 4 times. Thanks you. I pleased to hear voice. your energetic and lovely voice gives me the strength.
Paul
강사 첨삭
Good Morning! Thank you for giving me such compliments. I really appreciated it!
I thought you said I drop my phone in the water, that is why I was really surprised that its still works up to now.
Anyway, I hope everything is okay now?
I was so worried when you did not answer my call for 3 times, I know there is something wrong. I was very happy when you answered on the 4th call. But still, I am glad that it is only about your smart phone.
By the way, what is your name? Is it [이름] or Paul?
I will ll call you again [이름]orrow...
Dear [Name] !
>>>Dear [Name], I was embarrassed today morning.
>>>I was embarrassed early this morning.
My smartphone does not work suddenly.
>>>My Smartphone suddenly stopped working.I did not drop in the water but did not work.
>>>I did not drop it in the water.
Smartphone is very complicated, so small neglcting cause in a unable state.
>>> Smartphone is very complicated so small neglecting will cause unstable state.
I saw your massage you called me 4 times.
>>>I saw your message, you called me 4 times.
Thanks you. I pleased to hear voice. your energetic and lovely voice gives me the strength.>>>Thank you. I am pleased to hear your energetic and lovely voice that gives me strength.Paul
>>>Correct.
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