Thanksgiving day
학생이 쓴 원문
Tommorrow we are planning to go my grandparent's house.My grandparent's house is in Jeolla Province. It is far from my house.I have 4younger cousin and 2 older cousin in my grandparent's house. We usually play game together. My cousin love play game. We usually watch idol sports game on TV in Thanksgivingday. There are many entertainment good at running.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Enjoy your long holiday. Your cousins
must really happy when they see you.
Have some fun but also becareful, okay.
I will see you next week.
Have a great night ahead and have a blessed weekend.
~~ Teacher Kris
Tommorrow we are planning to go my grandparent\'s house.
>> Correct
My grandparent\'s house is in Jeolla Province.
>> Correct
It is far from my house.
>> Correct
I have 4younger cousin and 2 older cousin in my grandparent\'s house.
>> I have four younger cousins and two older cousins in my grandparent\'s house.
We usually play game together.
>> We usually play games together.
My cousin love play game.
>> My cousins love to play games.
We usually watch idol sports game on TV in Thanksgivingday.
>> We usually watch Sports games on TV in Thanksgiving day.
There are many entertainment good at running.
>> There are many good entertainments about running.
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