Thanksgiving day
학생이 쓴 원문
This Thanksgiving day was same as last Thanksgiving day except saw the movie Ant man.I visited my grandparents house and play cellphone game with my cousin. And I saw super moon.It was fantastic.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I\'m glad you enjoyed your holiday.
It\'s a day for fun and family, but you still had the time to do your homework. Great job!
You did good on your sentences. Keep it up, I\'m proud of you.
~~ Teacher Kris
This Thanksgiving day was same as last Thanksgiving day except saw the movie Ant man.
>>This Thanksgiving day was the same as the last year except for the movie Ant man.
I visited my grandparents house and play cellphone game with my cousin.
>> CORRECT
OR:
>>I visited my grandparents\' house and played cellphone games with my cousin.
And I saw super moon.
>>And I have seen the super moon.
It was fantastic.
>> CORRECT
OR:
>> It was so amazing.
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