Thanksgiving Day

2016-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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I visted my grandparents last week.I went to baseballstadium with my father,uncle and my cousins.I cheered a lot to KIA Tigers member.I like there but I didn't enjoy the game.Because KIA lost the game.The score was 7:3.Then,I went my cousin's house.We played smartphone game very much.Next day,mom and I went to my grandmother house and I watched TV.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!   I think you enjoyed your holiday except for your baseball team. Don\'t worry, maybe there will be a next game. Have a good day ahead! See you on Thursday!   _Teacher Dianne ^^   I visted my grandparents last week. >> I visited my grandparents last week. I went to baseballstadium with my father,uncle and my cousins. >> I went to a baseball stadium with my father, uncle, and my cousins. I cheered a lot to KIA Tigers member. >> I cheered a lot for a KIA Tigers member. I like there but I didn\'t enjoy the game.Because KIA lost the game. >> I like it there but I didn\'t enjoy the game because KIA lost the game. The score was 7:3.Then,I went my cousin\'s house. >> The score was 7-3 then after watching I went to my cousin\'s house. We played smartphone game very much. >> We played a smartphone game together. >> Or: We are fond of playing smartphone games. Next day,mom and I went to my grandmother house and I watched TV. >> On the next day, my mom and I went to my grandmother\'s house and then I watched TV.

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