Thanksgiving day and test score
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Yesterday was the last of the thanksgiving day.
>> Yesterday was the day of Thanksgiving.
On Thanksgiving day I went to my grandparent\'s house. But it was not fun.
>> Correct
I watched Tv and played baseball and played soccer.
>> Correct
or
>>> I watched TV and played baseball and soccer.
I enjoyed playing soccer but staying at my grandparent\'s house was too boring.
>> Correct
When I go to grandparent\'s house I always watch Tv at night.
>> Correct
But this time my grandmother turned off the TV.
>> Correct
It was really horrible. And I didn\'t see MLB.
>> Correct
And the food I ate was too simple. LA galbi is good but other foods are too simple.
>> The food I ate was too simple. Galbi is good but the other food are too simple.
I really hate kimchi. But if I go to my grandparent\'s house I should eat kimchi.
>> I really hate kimchi, but if I go to my grandparent\'s house I should eat kimchi.
Because there is no tasty food to eat.
>> Because there are no other tasty food to eat.
Wednesday I went to a movie with my friend and I went to bookstore.
>> On Wednesday, I went to see a movie with my friend and went to a bookstore.
But my mom got a call about my math teacher.
>> But my mom got a call from my Math teacher.
My math teacher was at my home. It was horrible.
>> My Math teacher was at my house, it was really horrible.
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