That
학생이 쓴 원문
has a very important advantage That is we have a wide sight.
Because when we are being a bilingual, we are going to experience a lot of another culture.
So we will have a wide sight.
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>> CORRECT.
That is we have a wide sight.
>> That is, we\'ll have a broader view.
>> Or: That is, we\'ll see more about the world.
Because when we are being a bilingual, we are going to experience a lot of another culture.
Because when we are being a bilingual, we are going to experience a lot of another culture.
>> Because when we are bilingual, we can experience a lot of different cultures.
So we will have a wide sight.
So we will have a wide sight.
>> So we will have a wider view about the world.
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