That
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question is so difficult. I think if we take some manners to every one, they would be happy. And if they\'re being happy, they would bring some happy to us. So we and they would be happy. That\'s why manners are important.
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Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for making your homework even if you found it difficult.
Still, you were able to give a good one. ^^
Have a good night! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: That is a very tough question.
I think if we take some manners to every one, they would be happy.
>> CORRECT.
And if they\'re being happy, they would bring some happy to us.
>> And if they\'re happy, they would bring us happiness.
So we and they would be happy.
>> So all of us would be happy.
That\'s why manners are important.
>> CORRECT.
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