That's a big bump!
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강사 첨삭
Happy hump day, [이름]!
I found your composition very funny today. Thank you for making me laugh. Keep on writing different compositions. I know you have a great potential. Why not try to write a dialogue for comics? Sounds interesting, right! Stay safe and warm ^^
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Eunice
Be careful! chair behind you!!(A person walked backward taking with his friend.
>> Be careful! There is a chair behind you!! (A person who walks backward while talking with his friend.)
There was a small chair which was on the his why. he didn\'t see that chair and might be falling soon)
>> There was a small chair on the his way, he didn\'t see that chair and he might be falling soon.
>> He didn\'t see the chair in front of him so he might accidentally fell on the floor.
Ah~~~(He fell down)
>> Ah~~~(He fell down.)
You fell backward and hit you head on the floor heavily due to the chair.
>> You fell backward and hit your head on the floor heavily because of the chair.
Oh, That\'s a big bump! are you okay?
>> Oh, that\'s a big bump are you okay?
>> Oh! you are wounded, are you alright?
I don\'t remember why i am lying on this floor.
>> I can\'t remember why I am lying on this floor.
I am okay. but I am seeing stars.
>> I am fine but I can see stars floating in the air.
Do you lose consciousness?
>> Did you lose your consciousness?
Do you know what day it is?
>> Did you know what day it is today?
I am really okay. and It\'s Thursday.
>> I am really fine and it\'s Thursday today.
Why do you ask again and again?
>> Why do you keep on asking?
I\'m checking your memory.
>> Correct!
>> I just want to make sure that you\'re fine.
If the size of the wheel is bigger, the vehicle speed calculation logic is working wrong because it may be calulated based on the circumference of wheel. to change a car part by oneself is very dangerous.
>> If the size of the wheel is bigger, the vehicle speed calculation logic will not function well because it was calculated based on the circumference of wheel.
to change a car part by oneself is very dangerous.
>> Customizing a car can be dangerous.
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