That\'s because everyone has different genes and environments.
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Hello Da [이름],
I\'m really impressed with how you talked about genes and environments making us different. Your example about genetic diseases and how kids can worry about getting them was really smart. And I understood how our surroundings can affect our fears with the drowning and abuse examples. Keep up the awesome work, and I\'m excited to see more of your great ideas!
~Teacher Cathy
That\'s
because everyone has different genes and environments.
>>CORRECT
OR>> It happens because
everyone carries different genes and lives in different environments.
Genes are received from parents.
>> CORRECT
OR>> Genes are passed
down from our parents.
For example, if a parent has a genetic disease, there will be a fear of the
disease because the child is likely to be born with it.
>> CORRECT
OR>>For
instance, if a parent has a genetic illness, the child might worry about
getting the same disease because it could be passed down.
And the environment is like a situation that was created whether I wanted to or
not.
>> The environment is
like a situation that was created whether I wanted to or not.
For example, drowning will lead to fear of water, and abuse will lead to fear
of violence.
>> For example, drowning will lead to a fear of water, and abuse will lead
to a fear of violence.
All of these factors seem like people have different fears.
>> All of these factors contribute to people having different fears.
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