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I don't want to see them if they really exist. Yes, freedom is essential for our life and world. That depends on their mind. Actually, It is not important what they wearing. but, I can't accept that men wear lipstick on his lip. In these days, lots of people call himself "coming out" which means becoming gay people. Yes, they have also right to enjoy their life and to have own choice. but I can't understand. I heard that In ancient Greece, Greek men were gay people. they only met women when they needed to make a baby. (It is not a fact. but It is delivered orally) anyway, In korea, becoming a gay is not common thing. So it is not familliar to see that kind of people. Even some people show them hostility. I respect their choice but I don't want to sit down next to them.

Good evening to you [이름]!Thank you for sending this tonight. I respect your stand. I do agree with you that we should respect their choices. You did a good job in using new vocabularies but be careful on how you use them in a sentence. Please go over the corrections below. See you tomorrow. Feel free to ask any questions in class. Teacher Nina   I don\'t want to see them if they really exist. >> CorrectYes, freedom is essential for our life and world. >> Yes, freedom is essential in our life and world. That depends on their mind. >> Correct>> OR: It depends on their perspective. Actually, It is not important what they wearing. >> Actually, it is not important what are they wearing, >> OR: Actually, it is not important what clothes are they wearing. but, I can\'t accept that men wear lipstick on his lip. >> But I can\'t accept that men wear lipstick on their lips. >> OR: I can\'t accept if a man wears lipstick on his lip. In these days, lots of people call himself \"coming out\" which means becoming gay people. >> These days, lots ot people call themselves as \"coming out\" which means becoming gay. >> OR: A lot of people call themselves as \"coming out\" which means becoming gay.Yes, they have also right to enjoy their life and to have own choice. but I can\'t understand. >> Yes, they also have the right to enjoy their life and to have their own choice, but I can\'t understand them. >> OR: Yes, they also have the right to enjoy their life and to have their own choice, but I can\'t understand their reason. I heard that In ancient Greece, Greek men were gay people. >> I heard that in Greece during the ancient time, Greek men were gay.they only met women when they needed to make a baby. >> They only meet women when they needed to make a baby. >> OR: They only meet women when they needed to make a family. (It is not a fact. but It is delivered orally) >> Correct >> OR: It is not a fact but this story is delivered by mouth.anyway, In korea, becoming a gay is not common thing. >> Correct >> OR: Anyway, in Korea, becoming gay is not common.So it is not familliar to see that kind of people. >> So, it is unusual for us to see those kinds of people. Even some people show them hostility. >> Did you mean: Some people even show them hostility. >> Better: Some people even show them a hostile act. I respect their choice but I don\'t want to sit down next to them. >> Correct