That\'s useless think

2022-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I\'m looking forward how much can I grow up. This year is the starting of my late 20s. And I have little bit a pressure to be a succed something. So I want to some relex time but I can\'t. When I rest one day at home, I have a lot of thinking. Like I wonder if I\'m on the right path. But I know, this is useless thinking :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann:)

Yes, sometimes we overthink but that\'s okay. Don\'t worry, you\'re on the right track. You have a lot of great opportunities nowadays. :)

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I\'m looking forward how much can I grow up.

>> I\'m looking forward to how much I will grow up.

This year is the starting of my late 20s.

>> This year is the start of my late 20\'s.

And I have little bit a pressure to be a succed something.

>> And I feel a little bit of pressure to succeed in something.

So I want to some relex time but I can\'t.

>> I want to take some time to relax but I can\'t.

When I rest one day at home, I have a lot of thinking.

>> When I rest for one day at home, I overthink.

Like I wonder if I\'m on the right path.

>> I always wonder if I am on the right path.

But I know, this is useless thinking :)

>> But I know that these thoughts are just nonsense.

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