That's why I m going to Austrailia

AS=Austrail The age was 1999, when I was 9 one day I read my father's paper I couldn't recall the exact circumstance. but by chance I read it. that was a just small article of the paper. the substance was about the AS working holiday while I was reading the paper I was attracted to mysterious of AS because actually I didn't know about AS. on that age just America, China Japan was familiar country to me after reading the paper I want to know more information about AS but I couldn't because in those days, there was no internet or lots of books to looking for information. but suddenly I realized. I guess my cousin had a book of world travel for childeren so a few days later when I went to my cousin's I found the book and read it fortunately the book had a part of AS and naturally I was shoked! what a very huge contry I think AS was the bigger than Korea about 100 times! but population was half than Korea and many beautiful beach, animals,and I decided when I grew up. Id go Austrail

Hello, Thank you for sharing your plans of visiting Australia. I hope that you get to visit soon. I heard about the beaches, and you are right, they are beautiful! Tell me about the koalas and kangaroos you\'ll see there when you get the chance. There were a few grammar flaws and some errors with the sentence structure. Please find the time to review them. Take care! __ T. JanE ^^ __ AS=Austrail >>AS=Australia The age was 1999, when I was 9 >>The year was 1999. I was nine years old.one day I read my father\'s paper >>One day, I read my father\'s paper.I couldn\'t recall the exact circumstance. but by chance I read it. >>I don\'t recall the exact circumstance, but had read that paper by chance.that was a just small article of the paper. the substance was about the AS working holiday>>There was a small article on the paper documenting the AS working holiday.while I was reading the paper I was attracted to mysterious of AS because actually I didn\'t know about AS. on that age >>While I was reading, I felt attracted to the mysterious AS because I did not know anything about it that time. just America, China Japan was familiar country to me >>The only familiar countries for me were America, China, and Japan.after reading the paper I want to know more information about AS >>Reading that newspaper article stimulated my curiosity and I wanted to know more about AS.but I couldn\'t because in those days, there was no internet or lots of books to looking for information. >>I can\'t look it up as much because there was no internet that time and books were limited.but suddenly I realized. I guess my cousin had a book of world travel for childeren >>Then I realized that my cousin had a book about world travel for children.so a few days later when I went to my cousin\'s I found the book and read it >>A few days later, I went over to my cousin\'s place, found the book, then read it.fortunately the book had a part of AS >>Fortunately, the book had an excerpt about AS.and naturally I was shoked! what a very huge contry >>Naturally, I felt shocked! It is a huge country!I think AS was the bigger than Korea about 100 times! but population was half than Korea >>I think that AS is one hundred times bigger than Korea, but their population is half than Korea\'s. and many beautiful beach, animals,and I decided when I grew up. Id go Austrail >>There are a lot of beautiful beaches and animals. I decided that when I grew up, I will go to Australia.