That\'s why someone who I am not well known to me is around there.
학생이 쓴 원문
Here is PC room.
I pay for it 1,000 won.
I will doing computer for about 40 minutes.
My computer is not working properly.
It\'s only my assumption.
I did paid a lot for my computer. but it\'s gone to someone who I don\'t know.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Great work in your homework because you were able to express your thoughts. Keep it up!^_^
That\\\'s why someone who I am not well known to me is around there.
>>>That\'s why I am not familiar with people around there.
Here is PC room.
>>>I\'m here in a PC room.
I pay for it 1,000 won.
>>>I pay 1,000 won for it.
OR>>>I usually pay 1,000 won for it.
I did paid a lot for my computer. but it\'s gone to someone who I don\'t know.
>>>I spent a lot for my computer, but it\'s gone and I don\'t know who took it.
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