That way is saying a positive something to our friend to go right a way
학생이 쓴 원문
there is many way to give a positive point to the best friend
say to go right way or have a positive mind if you have bad situation.
in my cause
some of my friend said me to go right away when I had a wrong choice. or when I see some friend who is successful
I would like to be him so I try to effort hardly for my dream
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. Thank you for your homework. I appreciate you accomplishing it once again. I hope you are having a wonderful evening. have a good night and let\'s talk about this in class. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
That way is saying a positive something to our friend to go right a way
>>> That is a way of saying a positive influence from our friends goes the right way.
there is many way to give a positive point to the best friend
>>> There are many ways to have a positive influence from our friends.
say to go right way or have a positive mind if you have bad situation.
>>> Giving me a bit of advice to have a positive mind when I am in a bad situation.
in my cause some of my friend said me to go right away when I had a wrong choice.
>>> For me, my friends encourage me to make the right choice when I make the wrong one.
or when I see some friend who is successful I would like to be him so I try to effort hardly for my dream
>>> Or when I see a successful friend, I would like to be him so I make enough effort to achieve my dream.
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