the 2nd March's homework

2018-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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How are you Here is Writing Exercise: If something is annoying you, what do you usually do? Answer in 5 sentences or more. If I am annoyed by someone, I would be persisting to continue having a relationship. But He or she makes me be irritated and hold back something. I would decide to articulate things that is reasonable. For example I'd persuade someone to get across a situation to make it easy. Barring telling him or her, it might be worse. Even it might affect the emotion how feel it is as well as characteristic of which is consists the relationship. I'm looking forward to your corrections. . From Spring

강사 첨삭

Hi Spring!

Please study the corrections below.

I hope they help you in your study of the language!

Keep it up!

~~ Teacher Sharon

If I am annoyed by someone, I would be persisting to continue having a relationship.

>> If I am annoyed by someone, I would persist to maintain the relationship.

But He or she makes me be irritated and hold back something.

>> If someone irritates me, I would try to hold back the things I want to say.

I would decide to articulate things that is reasonable.

>> I will only speak of things that make sense and which are reasonable.

For example I\'d persuade someone to get across a situation to make it easy.

>> For example I\'d persuade someone to overcome a situation to make things easy. 

Barring telling him or her, it might be worse.

>> It might be worse if I keep things inside.

Even it might affect the emotion how feel it is as well as characteristic of which is consists the relationship.

>> It might even affect my emotions and ultimately, put my relationships at risk.

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