the 2nd March's homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Spring!
Please study the corrections below.
I hope they help you in your study of the language!
Keep it up!
~~ Teacher Sharon
If I am annoyed by someone, I would be persisting to continue having a relationship.
>> If I am annoyed by someone, I would persist to maintain the relationship.
But He or she makes me be irritated and hold back something.
>> If someone irritates me, I would try to hold back the things I want to say.
I would decide to articulate things that is reasonable.
>> I will only speak of things that make sense and which are reasonable.
For example I\'d persuade someone to get across a situation to make it easy.
>> For example I\'d persuade someone to overcome a situation to make things easy.
Barring telling him or her, it might be worse.
>> It might be worse if I keep things inside.
Even it might affect the emotion how feel it is as well as characteristic of which is consists the relationship.
>> It might even affect my emotions and ultimately, put my relationships at risk.
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