The Accomplishment that I most proud of
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The one thing among my accomplishments that I most proud of is that I enter into the university. Because I think that became a student of university it shows how I studied hard during my middle and high school. And I think in South Korea it\'s really hard to enter into the university which is located in Seoul. So for these reasons entering into the university is the biggest accomplishments for now.
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Hi, Grace^^
Thank you for sharing.
Oh, yes! That\'s true!
I heard a lot about the highly competitive Sun[이름]g, too.
_T. SHAY^^
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The one thing among my accomplishments that I most proud of is that I enter into the university. Because I think that became a student of university it shows how I studied hard during my middle and high school.
>>The accomplishment I am most proud of is being admitted to a university, as it reflects how hard I studied during middle and high school.
OR: The achievement I am most proud of is gaining admission to a university, which represents the sustained effort and discipline I demonstrated during my secondary education.
And I think in South Korea it\'s really hard to enter into the university which is located in Seoul.
>>I also think that in South Korea, it is very difficult to get into a university located in Seoul.
OR: In South Korea, admission to universities in Seoul is highly competitive and difficult to achieve.
So for these reasons entering into the university is the biggest accomplishments for now.
>>For these reasons, getting into university is my greatest accomplishment so far.
OR: For these reasons, admission to a university represents my most significant achievement to date.
Thank you for sharing.
Oh, yes! That\'s true!
I heard a lot about the highly competitive Sun[이름]g, too.
_T. SHAY^^
***
The one thing among my accomplishments that I most proud of is that I enter into the university. Because I think that became a student of university it shows how I studied hard during my middle and high school.
>>The accomplishment I am most proud of is being admitted to a university, as it reflects how hard I studied during middle and high school.
OR: The achievement I am most proud of is gaining admission to a university, which represents the sustained effort and discipline I demonstrated during my secondary education.
And I think in South Korea it\'s really hard to enter into the university which is located in Seoul.
>>I also think that in South Korea, it is very difficult to get into a university located in Seoul.
OR: In South Korea, admission to universities in Seoul is highly competitive and difficult to achieve.
So for these reasons entering into the university is the biggest accomplishments for now.
>>For these reasons, getting into university is my greatest accomplishment so far.
OR: For these reasons, admission to a university represents my most significant achievement to date.
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