The action that government taking to address the problem of global warming.
학생이 쓴 원문
The representative government\'s policy is reducing disposable products. The Ministry of environment is implementing the policy since last year. The cafe can not offer beverages indoor, but only can use plastic cups when customer wants to take out the beverage. As people get used to this policy, I could discovered that the cafe looks tidy then before. In Korea, almost of cafe is running self-returning system. After we drink up the beverages, we cleaning the cups, straw that we used to the returning booth. However, because of the policy, the trash in the returning both is reduced, so that the cafe looks more tidy. I think this policy is successful case. The government should come up with the policy like what the Ministry of environment did.
강사 첨삭
WOW! Thank you for sharing [이름]! This is one good thought and a wonderful policy your Ministry of Environment has implemented. I think it\'s something that business establishments like cafe\'s and restaurants must emulate! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
The representative government\'s policy is reducing disposable products.
>>CORRECT
The Ministry of environment is implementing the policy since last year.
>>The Ministry of environment has been implementing the policy since last year.
The cafe can not offer beverages indoor, but only can use plastic cups when customer wants to take out the beverage.
>>Cafe\'s can no longer serve their coffee in plastic cups but may only do so when it\'s for take out.
As people get used to this policy, I could discovered that the cafe looks tidy then before.
>>As people are getting used to this policy, I have observed that cafe\'s look tidier than before.
In Korea, almost of cafe is running self-returning system.
>>In Korea, almost all cafes are running a self-returning system.
After we drink up the beverages, we cleaning the cups, straw that we used to the returning booth.
>>After we have used the cups and straws, we have to wash them and return it to their booths/containers.
However, because of the policy, the trash in the returning both is reduced, so that the cafe looks more tidy.
>>And because of this policy, the trash in the returning booth is reduced, and cafes look tidier.
I think this policy is successful case.
>>I think this policy is quite successful.
The government should come up with the policy like what the Ministry of environment did.
>>CORRECT
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