The activity I do with my friends.
학생이 쓴 원문
I play dodgeball with my friends at school.It is very exciting.That is because it’s fun of aiming friends with a ball.And dodging the ball is exiting too. But I’m not good at dodgeball and I want to be good at it someday.
강사 첨삭
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HOMEWORK:
I play dodgeball with my friends at school.It is very exciting.That is
because it’s fun of aiming friends with a ball.And dodging the ball is
exiting too. But I’m not good at dodgeball and I want to be good at it
someday.
>> I play dodge ball with my friends at school. It is very exciting
because it’s fun aiming my friends with a ball. And dodging the ball is
exiting too. But I’m not good at dodging or I\'m not good at playing dodge ball and I want to be good at it
someday.
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