The advantage and disadvantage of living in the city
학생이 쓴 원문
The city is convenience
Because there are restaurants hospitals makets and
Parke
There are too many cars and noisy
강사 첨삭
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The city is convenience
>> The city is convenient
OR: Life in the city is more convenient.
Because there are restaurants hospitals makets and Parke
Because there are restaurants hospitals makets and Parke
>> Because there are many restaurants, hospitals, markets and parks.
There are too many cars and noisy
>> But there are too many cars and it is noisy.
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