The advantage and necessity of self-isolation is that it can minimize the spread of infectious disea
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Good evening Eliot! Thank you for sharing your journey during the isolation period/quarantine. Keep safe and have a good night ahead! See you soon Eliot!:)
~T. Annie
The advantage and necessity of self-isolation is that it can minimize the spread of infectious diseases.
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The disadvantage is that the economic loss of the quarantined person occurs and the social and economic system shrinks.
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As with Corona, the isolation of a large number of people has a great impact on the social system.>>
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In order for the social isolation system to operate efficiently and effectively, social consensus and active participation of the people are essential.
>>In order for the social isolation system to operate efficiently and effectively, social consensus and the active participation of the people are essential.
I think the Republic of Korea has dealt with Corona well over the past two years.
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It was possible because the government did well and many people participated well.
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I have been quarantined twice.
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Fortunately, there were no specific symptoms.
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So, during quarantine, I had a good time studying and exercising.
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Anyway, I think it\'s fortunate that Korea is now almost back to normal.
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