The advantage of living in the countryside
학생이 쓴 원문
First, with nature I can keep healthy physically and mentally. Second, we have many experiences that we can\'t have in cities, such as gathering and sharing food with neighbors, having my vegetable garden, catching marsh snails, or enjoying different five-day open markets.
Lastly, I keep slow life and don\'t get stress from the hectic city life.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I totally agree with you! Those are also the things I look forward to whenever we visit my husband\'s hometown: the serenity of the place, beautiful scenery, and the warmth of the people.
-T. Caitlyn
First, with nature I can keep healthy physically and mentally.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: First, I can be physically and mentally healthy with nature.
Second, we have many experiences that we can\'t have in cities, such as gathering and sharing food with neighbors, having my vegetable garden, catching marsh snails, or enjoying different five-day open markets.
>> CORRECT
Lastly, I keep slow life and don\'t get stress from the hectic city life.
Lastly, I keep slow life and don\'t get stress from the hectic city life.
>> Lastly, I keep a slow-paced life and don\'t get stressed from the hectic city life.
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