The advantages and disadvantages of studyng abroad
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I think we can learn language easily and fastly when we studying abroad. Also we can learn culture so it’s helpful for understanding. But I think I’ll miss people by my side. And we can’t eat foods that only in our country. I think these are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad.
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Hi [이름]! I think both of them have advantages and disadvantages at the same time too. You can benefit a lot and have a hard time as well. It just depends on how you\'re going to handle your situation abroad. :)
I think we can learn language easily and fastly when we studying abroad.
>> I think we can learn language easily and faster when we study abroad.
Also we can learn culture so it’s helpful for understanding.
>>Also we can learn the culture there too so it’s helpful for understanding.
But I think I’ll miss people by my side.
>> Although, I think I\'ll miss the people by my side.
And we can’t eat foods that only in our country.
>> We also can\'t eat foods that are native in our country.
I think these are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad.
>> CORRECT
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