The advantages and disadvantages of TV
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I actually don\'t like watching TV because there are not many programs I want to see. There are some advantages of TV. Firstly, there are various kinds of channels on TV. secondly, I can see the movies with big screen on TV. Now I will say about disadvantages of TV. Firstly watching TV could waste of time. Secondly, there are a lot of useless programs.
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I actually don\'t like watching TV because there are not many programs I
want to see. There are some advantages of TV. Firstly, there are various
kinds of channels on TV. secondly, I can see the movies with big screen
on TV. Now I will say about disadvantages of TV. Firstly watching TV
could waste of time. Secondly, there are a lot of useless programs.
>> I actually don\'t like watching TV because there are not many programs I
want to see. There are some advantages of TV. Firstly, there are various
kinds of channels on TV. secondly, I can see the movies with big screen
on TV. Now I will say about disadvantages of TV. Firstly watching TV
could be a waste of time. Secondly, there are a lot of useless programs.
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