the advantages are getting healthy and saving the money that you can spend to buy a gas
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disadvantages is that you need more time to get your office and school that is meaning you may lose your time
and an other one is you might have little bit tired after bike riding
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Hi, [이름]. Thank you for catching up on your homework. I appreciate it. You are more conscious of your grammar this time and you gave more details. Good work! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
the advantages are getting healthy and saving the money that you can spend to buy a gas
>> The advantages are you can be healthy and save money that you can spend on gas.
disadvantages is that you need more time to get your office and school that is meaning you may lose your time
>> The disadvantage is that you need more time to get to your office or school so you may lose much time.
and an other one is you might have little bit tired after bike riding
>> Another one is you might feel a little bit tired after riding the bike.
the advantages are getting healthy and saving the money that you can spend to buy a gas
>> The advantages are you can be healthy and save money that you can spend on gas.
disadvantages is that you need more time to get your office and school that is meaning you may lose your time
>> The disadvantage is that you need more time to get to your office or school so you may lose much time.
and an other one is you might have little bit tired after bike riding
>> Another one is you might feel a little bit tired after riding the bike.
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