The advantages of having a hobby
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I think having a hobby is very important for our life.
If someone works every time without hobby, it will be exhausted easy.
having a hobby is a rest.
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I think having a hobby is very important for our life.
>> I think having a hobby is very important in someone\'s life.
If someone works every time without hobby, it will be exhausted easy.
If someone works every time without hobby, it will be exhausted easy.
>> If someone keeps on working without having a break, he would be totally exhausted.
having a hobby is a rest.
having a hobby is a rest.
>> We can do our hobbies as part of our rest.
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