The advantages of having deadlines
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First of all, deadlines press me to finish my tasks in time. If there are no deadlines, I will delay my tasks everyday and I have to do all of the tasks next day. Secondly, deadlines help me to follow the monthly schedule. Thanks to deadlines, I can execute my plans without messing up schedules and I don\'t have to ruin my long-term purpose.
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Thanks for sharing, [이름]. :)
-T. Gabby :)
First of all, deadlines press me to finish my tasks in time.
>> Correct.
If there are no deadlines, I will delay my tasks everyday and I have to do all of the tasks next day.
>> Correct.
Secondly, deadlines help me to follow the monthly schedule.
>> Secondly, deadlines help me follow my monthly schedule.
Thanks to deadlines, I can execute my plans without messing up schedules and I don\'t have to ruin my long-term purpose.
>> Correct.
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