The advantages of living in a city

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At the age of 4, I moved to Busan, which is the second largest city in Korea where I grew up.

>> At the age of 4, I moved to Busan, which is the second largest city in Korea and this is where I grew up.

I took it for granted that I had some advantags of living in a city.

>> I took it for granted that there were a lot of advantages in living in a city.
Good things about it is that I can travel by taxi, subway, or bus to get my destination sopt.

>> The good things about it are that I can travel by taxi, subway, or bus to get to my destination spot.

I don\'t need to drive.

>> Correct 

Cities have convenience of public transportation.

>> Cities have convenient modes of public transportation.

And there are mnay kinds of amenities.

>> There are also many kinds of amenities.

Also they have the benefit of higher concentration jobs, more networking opportunities, higher salaries and ample social life.

>> There is also a higher concentration of jobs, more networking opportunities, higher salaries and ample social life in the city.
Even though they have some disadvantages of living in a city, I prefer living in a city to in a rural area.

>> Even though there are some disadvantages in living in a city, I prefer this to living in a rural area.