The advantages of using public transport
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There are two advantages of using public transport.
>> Correct.
First, Using public transport is able to reduce pollution.
>> First, using public transport reduces pollution.
If all people who using public transport use thier own vehicle The vehicle will make more than hunderd times greenhouse gases.
>> If everyone who takes public transport starts using their own vehicles, the amount of greenhouse gases produced will increase by over a hundred times.
It is not included flowing pollution from traffic jam.
>> It does not include the pollution caused by traffic jams.
Secondary, It is more convenient than driving by myself.
>> Secondly, it is more convenient than driving by myself.
I can do other things such as reading books, watching movies and videos during the transport time.
>>I can do other activities such as reading books, watching movies, and videos during the commute.
And I can drink when I hang out with my friends If I use public transport.
>> Additionally, I can have a drink when hanging out with my
friends if I use public transport.
To reduce pollution and convenient are the benefit of using public transport.
>> The benefits of using public transport include reducing pollution and convenience.
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