The advice I wanted.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a kid, I wish someone would advise me to eat less. It\'s because I ate too much and was full since I was young. So I still eat a lot and spend a lot of money. And as I continue to eat a lot, my constitution changes and I gain weight.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
When I was a kid, I wish someone would advise me to eat less.
>>> When I was a kid, I wish someone would advised me to eat less.
It\'s because I ate too much and was full since I was young.
>>> CORRECT!
So I still eat a lot and spend a lot of money.
>>> CORRECT!
And as I continue to eat a lot, my constitution changes and I gain weight.
>>> And as I continue to eat a lot, my constitution changes, and I gain weight.
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