The age which children leave from their parents
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Here are my corrections for you:
In my country, children usually leave their parents after they graduate their college.
>> In my country, children usually leave their parents\' home after they graduate from college.
Many people who attend the college need the help of their parents about tuition of school and living cost.
>> Many people who attend college need the help of their parents with tuition for school and living cost.
So, after they graduate their college, they finally seek for job to live by themselves.
>> So after they graduate from college, they finally seek for a job to live by themselves.
At the time, they leave their parents.
>> At that time, they leave their parents\' home.
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