The Amazon Rainforest
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The Amazon Rainforest is the ecosystems with significant impact on global temperature.
However, this area is threatened by global warming.
To solve this problem, we have to save the energy and use eco-friendly products.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!^^
However, this area is threatened by global warming.
To solve this problem, we have to save the energy and use eco-friendly products.
Thanks for doing some research about the Amazon Rainforest.
Hope you learned something from this homework. :)
Andrea
The Amazon Rainforest is the ecosystems with significant impact on global temperature.
>> The Amazon Rainforest is an ecosystem with a significant impact on global temperature.
However, this area is threatened by global warming.
>> Correct
To solve this problem, we have to save the energy and use eco-friendly products.
>> To solve this problem, we have to save energy and use eco-friendly products.
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