The ambitious water project that failed to prevent drought
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1. What is the article about?
The lack of water in several citis in india although the water related policy by government.
>> The lack of water in several cities in India although the water related policy by government.
2. Will reading this article make you more careful about the amount of water you use?
Yes. Although the policy and construction also the problem in this situation, the fundamental reason is the lack of rain.
>> Yes. Although the policy and construction is also the problem in this situation, the fundamental reason is the lack of rain.
Water shortage could be very serious issue soon or later in every country.
>> Water shortage could be a very serious issue soon or later in every country.
3. What makes droughts dangerous and what can we do about it?
I think the main reason is air pollution these days.
>> CORRECT
For the changes of average temperature on earth, the drought could be more serious than ever.
>> For the changes of the average temperature on earth, the drought could be more serious than ever.
In this time, what we can do for is saving water usage.
>> In this time, all we can do for is save water usage.
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