The announcement for the Easter mass

2016-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

Thank you bishop for coming here. As a first stage of welcome event. flower kids will give you present as a sign of welcoming. Let us all prepare for the easter mass. Please take a seat. We still have enough seats in front of the alter. Please come to the front and take a seat. Hello everyone here. We are going to have a recreation time. I think we nee to warm up our body before the main event of the recreation time. To warm up our body, Let us sing a song “more, more, more” with dancing. We will invite dance specialists. Please watch and learn how to dance. The dance step will be very easy to follow. She will give us the demonstration. And the next game that we are going to play is the hurdle race. The first obstacle is the mat, The runner have to pass the mat with rolling and the second obstacle is the hurdle, The runner need to pass the hurdle with jumping or under the hurdle. The final obstacle is running with putting on swim fins.

강사 첨삭

Thank you bishop for coming here. >> CORRECT! OR >> Thank you bishop for gracing us with your presence. As a first stage of welcome event. flower kids will give you present as a sign of welcoming. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: For the first part of our welcoming event, please accept our present to you.  Let us all prepare for the easter mass. >> Let us all prepare for the Easter mass. Please take a seat. >> CORRECT! OR >> Please sit down.We still have enough seats in front of the alter. >> We still have enough seats in front of the altar. Please come to the front and take a seat.>> Please occupy the seats in front. Hello everyone here. >> Hello, everyone. We are going to have a recreation time. >> CORRECT! OR >> It\'s now time for us to relax and have fun.I think we nee to warm up our body before the main event of the recreation time. >> I think we nee to warm up our bodies before the main event. To warm up our body, Let us sing a song “more, more, more” with dancing. >> To warm up our bodies, let us sing the song “More, more, more” and accompany it with a dance.We will invite dance specialists. >> We will invite some of our brothers and sisters to show us the dance steps. Please watch and learn how to dance. >> Please watch and learn the dance steps. The dance step will be very easy to follow. >> CORRECT! OR >> The dance step is quite easy. She will give us the demonstration.>> CORRECT! OR >> She will demonstrate it for us. And the next game that we are going to play is the hurdle race. >> CORRECT! OR >> The next game that we are going to play is called the hurdle race.The first obstacle is the mat, The runner have to pass the mat with rolling and the second obstacle is the hurdle, The runner need to pass the hurdle with jumping or under the hurdle. >> The first obstacle is the mat. The runner has to pass the mat while rolling. The second obstacle is the hurdle. The runner needs to pass through the hurdle by jumping or going under the hurdle. The final obstacle is running with putting on swim fins. >> The final obstacle is running with the swimming fins on.

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