The announcement for the easter sunday
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Today’s final game is the game of bursting ballon.
>> Today’s final game is the game of bursting balloons.
OR >> The final game will be bursting balloons.
Each player in the team allow to attach ballon under the knee as much as you can.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: Each player in the team has to attach as many balloons as you can under your knees.
But you have to attach the ballon under the knee.
>> But you have to attach the balloon under your knee.
There will be no limitation of ballon number that you can attach under the knee.
>> There will be no limitation to the number of balloons that you can attach under your knees.
As the number of survivor, The victory team will be determined.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: The team with more balloons will be the winner.
I am going to explain how to play the game.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I am going to show you how to play the game.
The fist game that we are going to play altogether is turning the colour pennal over.
>> The fist game that we are going to play altogether is turning the color panel over.
OR >> The fist game that we are going to play altogether is called turning the color panel over.
The colour pannels will be placed on the floor.
>> The color panels will be placed on the floor.
Each team has their own colour.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Each team will have a corresponding color.
Once the game start, Team member have to turn over the other team’s colour pannels as possible as you can.
>> Once the game starts, the team members have to turn over the other team’s color panels as much as they can.
And there is a time limit
>> There is a time limit for this.
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