The announcement for the easter sunday

2016-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Today’s final game is the game of bursting ballon. Each player in the team allow to attach ballon under the knee as much as you can. But you have to attach the ballon under the knee. There will be no limitation of ballon number that you can attach under the knee. As the number of survivor, The victory team will be determined. I am going to explain how to play the game. The fist game that we are going to play altogether is turning the colour pennal over. The colour pannels will be placed on the floor. Each team has their own colour. Once the game start, Team member have to turn over the other team’s colour pannels as possible as you can. And there is a time limit

강사 첨삭

Today’s final game is the game of bursting ballon.

>> Today’s final game is the game of bursting balloons.

OR >> The final game will be bursting balloons. 
Each player in the team allow to attach ballon under the knee as much as you can.

>> [DO YOU MEAN]: Each player in the team has to attach as many balloons as you can under your knees.

But you have to attach the ballon under the knee.

>> But you have to attach the balloon under your knee. 
There will be no limitation of ballon number that you can attach under the knee.

>> There will be no limitation to the number of balloons that you can attach under your knees.
As the number of survivor, The victory team will be determined.

>> [DO  YOU MEAN]: The team with more balloons will be the winner.
I am going to explain how to play the game.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I am going to show you how to play the game.
The fist game that we are going to play altogether is turning the colour pennal over.

>> The fist game that we are going to play altogether is turning the color panel over.

OR >> The fist game that we are going to play altogether is called turning the color panel over.
The colour pannels will be placed on the floor.

>> The color panels will be placed on the floor.
Each team has their own colour.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Each team will have a corresponding color.

Once the game start, Team member have to turn over the other team’s colour pannels as possible as you can.

>> Once the game starts, the team members have to turn over the other team’s color panels as much as they can.

And there is a time limit

>> There is a time limit for this.  

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