The annuncement for the member of choir

2016-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning everybody. I hope that everybody is doing well in your daily life and God bless you. As you know, It has been already the third week of lenten season. That mean the Easter Sunday is going to come soon. And we are preparing special event for the Eater mass. A lot of friend around this town will get together and celebrate the resurrection of Jesus who victims the death and Dea-Jeon diocesan bishop will hold the easter mass for us. It will be a graceful mass and I am sure that God will be praised and be magnified and be exalted through our praise. So, To offer better and beautiful praises, we are going to have a practice for the Easter Sunday mass. I am thinking of practicing on Saturday evening after dinner or before dinner. It seems to be difficult that every member of choir won’t be able to attend the practice because of personal schedule.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mr. [Name]! (^^,) How\'s your day at work so far?I hope you\'re doing great! I also hope majority of your choir members will be able to attend the practice on Saturday so you could prepare well for the special mass on Easter Sunday. ^^ Stay happy and blessed. See you again tomorrow! ~T. Charry Good morning everybody. >> CORRECT! OR >> Good morning everyone.I hope that everybody is doing well in your daily life and God bless you. >> CORRECT! OR >> I hope that everybody is doing well in your daily life and I hope that God blesses you more.As you know, It has been already the third week of lenten season. >> As you know, it\'s already the third week of Lenten season.  OR >> As you know, we are now on the third week of Lenten season.  That mean the Easter Sunday is going to come soon. And we are preparing special event for the Eater mass. >> That means, Easter Sunday is going to come soon and we need to prepare for the special event for the Easter mass.   OR >> That means, Easter Sunday is coming soon and we need to prepare for the special event for the Easter mass.   A lot of friend around this town will get together and celebrate the resurrection of Jesus who victims the death and Dea-Jeon diocesan bishop will hold the easter mass for us. >> A lot of friends around this town will get together and celebrate the resurrection of Jesus who sacrificed himself for us. To help us celebrate this event, the Dea-Jeon diocesan bishop will hold the easter mass for us. It will be a graceful mass and I am sure that God will be praised and be magnified and be exalted through our praise. >> It will be a graceful mass and I am sure that God will be praised, be magnified and be exalted through our praises. So, To offer better and beautiful praises, we are going to have a practice for the Easter Sunday mass. >> CORRECT! OR >> To offer better and beautiful praises, we are going to have a practice for the Easter Sunday mass.I am thinking of practicing on Saturday evening after dinner or before dinner. >> CORRECT! OR >> I think, it would be nice if we practice on Saturday evening, after dinner or before dinner. It seems to be difficult that every member of choir won\'t be able to attend the practice because of personal schedule. >> It seems difficult for all of the members of the choir to attend the practice because of personal schedule. OR >> It seems difficult for all of the members of the choir to attend the practice because of our conflicting schedules.

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