the annyversary of the Independence movement

It was a big day for korean. It was a first day to resist japanese inspite they always restrict our all action like gethering people, discussion each others and so on. We gathered voluntarily and started action of resitanced even if they treated cowardly like tutures and throwed us into prison. so people who want freedom, They organized people and taught people and wrote a special protocol. it decleared that our independence. we printed that protocol and delivered all over the country. We gave three cheers for our independence. and then lot's of people who joined that movement put into prisons. One girl is really famous her name is you kan soon. She was a little girl. and continuously resistance in prison. She died in prison. So we still remember her the meaning of freedom.

Hi [이름]!!! Here is another composition. I noticed that there were some mistakes with your subject verb agreement. Also be very careful with the usage of your pronouns. Try to check the compositions that you pass and try not to make same mistakes. Have a great holiday. See you on Wednesday!!Lei J It was a big day for korean. >>It is a big day for Koreans. It was a first day to resist japanese inspite they always restrict our all action like gethering people, discussion each others and so on. >>It was the day that we resist the Japanese in-spite of always restricting all our actions like gathering people and having discussions. We gathered voluntarily and started action of resitanced even if they treated cowardly like tutures and throwed us into prison. >>We gathered voluntarily started to have an act of resistance even if they do it cowardly, tutoring and throwing us in prison. so people who want freedom, >>So people wanted to have freedom. They organized people and taught people and wrote a special protocol. >>They organized the people and taught them how to write a protocol. it decleared that our independence. >>In that way they declared our independence. we printed that protocol and delivered all over the country. >>correct We gave three cheers for our independence. >>correct and then lot's of people who joined that movement put into prisons. >>and then a lot of people who joined that movement were put into prison. One girl is really famous her name is you kan soon. >>correct She was a little girl. and continuously resistance in prison. >>She was a little girl who continuously resisted even in prison. She died in prison. >>correct So we still remember her the meaning of freedom. >>So we always remember her and the meaning of our freedom.