The answer of Nation(2013-09-02)

2013-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lexi

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Check Statement 1. Sungkyunkwan University recorded the highst employment rate. 2. Korea University came second and Seoul Natioal University followed it. 3. It's 59.3 percent. 4. The overseas employment rate has also increased. 5. It was 1.75 trillion wan last year. Thinking Statement 1. Because Sungkyunkwan students study and prepare for the job hardly. And their professior helped them. 2. The highest prestigious university is not the highest rank of emloyment rate. 3. Job seekers should have ability to do job.

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Hi there  ^-^ Thank you for still sending this in even if we didn\'t cover it. Whew! I like your initiative!!! I just can\'t wait  to talk with you about a new topic. See yeah!  ~~Teacher Lexi Here are my corrections: Check Statement1. Sungkyunkwan University recorded the highst employment rate. >>Correct  (spelling check- highest)2. Korea University came second and Seoul Natioal University followed it.>>  Korea University came second and Seoul National University of Science and Technology followed it.3. It\'s 59.3 percent.>>Correct ^^4. The overseas employment rate has also increased.>>Correct ^^5. It was 1.75 trillion wan last year.>>Correct ^^ (spelling check- won)Thinking Statement1. Because Sungkyunkwan students study and prepare for the job hardly. And their professior helped them.>> Perfect!!2. The highest prestigious university is not the highest rank of emloyment rate.>>The most prestigious university doesn\'t have the highest percentage of employment rate.3. Job seekers should have ability to do job. >> Clever!!!  

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