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2013-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lexi

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Thinking Statement 1. These day, personal information is important problem social and individual. 2. Government can check criminals easily but, good people can be violated privacy.

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Hi there ^-^ I like your insights about the article tonight. You sound so mature despite your age. Anyways, keep expressing your thoughts and ideas. It \'ll help you a lot to be conversant in English. See you. Teacher Lexi Please see my corrections below: Thinking Statement1. These day, personal information is important problem social and individual. >>These days, divulging personal information is an important social and individual issue. 2. Government can check criminals easily but, good people can be violated privacy. >>Government can check criminals easily but privacy of good people can be violated.

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